The following numbers assigned as
scores are modeled on the system used by the College Board at Advanced
Placement English Examination Readings:
9‑8: These scores are for
essays in which excellent content and impressive writing reveal the writer's
ability to reason with perception and to express ideas clearly and skillfully
with stylistic maturity. They accomplish all of the following:
¥ an understanding of the assignment or question;
¥ a depth of analysis supported by appropriate, specific
references to the text and the student's ability to apply knowledge of literary
techniques to a valid interpretation of content;
¥ a sense of the complexity (e.g., nuance, irony, ambiguity,
or shift in perspective) of the passage to be analyzed; and
¥ consistent control over the elements of effective writing,
particularly diction, syntax, and structure.
7‑6: These scores are for essays that are somewhat similar
to but not as strong as the 9‑8 essay. These essays demonstrate the
writer's ability to express ideas clearly but with less maturity and control
than the top papers and sometimes with minor flaws in interpretation or
writing.
5: This score is for those essays that demonstrate any or
all of the following:
¥ an understanding of the question but not a full analysis,
often with vague, superficial, limited answers which reflect a simplistic
approach and flaws in interpretation;
¥ little specific support from the text;
¥ writing that adequately conveys the writer's thoughts but
which is not as well conceived, organized, or developed as the upper level
papers;
¥ writing that lacks stylistic maturity; and
¥ a mechanical formula as the vehicle for limited thinking.
4‑3: This score is for essays that compound the
weaknesses of the five essays in any or all of the following areas:
¥ weak control over the elements of good writing including
diction, syntax, or structure;
¥ failure to demonstrate a complete understanding of the
question or assignment;
¥ mostly plot summary with little analysis;
¥ incomplete response to the prompt;
¥ recurrent stylistic flaws; and
¥ lack of specific, persuasive evidence from the text for
support.
2‑1: These scores are for essays that fail to
respond adequately to the question. They may exhibit any or all of the
following:
¥ distortion or misapplication of the work or assignment;
¥ serious problems in diction, syntax, or structure;
¥ mere summary of the plot;
slack of clarity, organization, or
supporting evidence; and
¥ such a brief answer that the student's writing ability cannot be identified.